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date: Tue Jul 26 16:38:43 2005
from: Phil Jones <p.jonesatXYZxyz.ac.uk>
subject: Re: Revised CQs
to: Kevin Trenberth <trenbertatXYZxyzr.edu>

Kevin,
Agree on lower atmosphere.
Not sure on 2). Your first suggestion is probably better, but the second covers
more of the message I was trying to convey. So go with the second.
Cheers
Phil
At 15:24 26/07/2005, you wrote:

Phil I am having trouble with one sentence: it is not right English wise.
Temperature estimates for the lower parts of the atmospheric column (~2-8km), despite
being different quantities than those measured at the surface, show similar warming
rates (within the error estimates of the two datasets) to the surface since 1958 (from
radiosondes) and from 1979 (from satellites).
1) Suggest "lower atmosphere" instead of lower parts of the atmospheric column: don't
like "parts"
2) The "despite being different quantities" does not work. We could say
"a physically distinct region" or
despite being independent of those at the surface
Kevin
Phil Jones wrote:

Kevin,


Updated the pdf directory. Sent some revisions to Lisa for the references.
Some title changes so sent pdfs where needed.
Here's my mods to CQ3.2. They are red on my machine. Changes to
the other CQs are only to make the text WG Body Text.
I'll now go through your revised attachment and approve or whatever.
Mark New should then arrive. He should be gone by 4pm, by which time
you'll likely be in .
Don't forget to get Lisa to email me with any problems in the refs.
Cheers
Phil
Prof. Phil Jones
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School of Environmental Sciences Fax +44 (0) 1603 507784
University of East Anglia
Norwich Email [1]p.jonesatXYZxyz.ac.uk
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