date: Mon, 20 Jun 2005 14:48:55 +0200
from: Fortunat Joos <joosatXYZxyzmate.unibe.ch>
subject: Re: [Wg1-ar4-ch06] IPCC FOD : Holocene section
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Attached suggestions and revision for the Holocene section. I have
slightly expanded on Ruddiman taking into account the most recent
I have also updated the GHG figure, now showing also radiative forcing
relative to 1765 conditions on a linear scale.
The references for the GHG data are all given on top of the data files
that I sent to you for the ZOD. Please let me know if I need to resend.
The NOAA data (butler, conway, dlugokencky) are personal communications.
With best wishes,
Val�rie Masson-Delmotte wrote:
> Dear all,
> Please find attached a new sketch for the FOD section on the Holocene -
> it has to be finalised before June 15th, and figures must be finished
> before June 1st (you can see the tracked changes from the ZOD version).
> I have modified the structure to include the modelling part (incl. text
> from Chapter 9), the suggestions by the reviewers, and something about
> interannual variability from the previous last section of the ZOD. I
> need to reprocess all the text + references, modify the labelling of the
> sections (new structure of the chapter). The references are not totally
> inside the attached Endnote database but most of them are already.
> I have several requests for many of you :
> - Fortunat : you kindly offered to provide me with a xmgr figure showing
> the Holocene GHG evolution, so ... this will be fine.
> - Dick : can you update the description of ice sheet evolution during
> the early Holocene (e.g. precise volume of ice caps at 10k, 8k, 6k,
> dates of disappearance of Laurentide and Fennoscandia)
> - Bettie : can you go through the modelling part (especially what I
> called : what do we learn from equlibrium simulations) and improve it +
> provide the table
> - Eystein, Stefan : where does the 8.2 event go? In the previous section
> on glacial interglacial time scale + rapid events or in the Holocene
> section on rapid events?
> - Dominik : can you please have a look at this terrible draft and
> contact me to discuss the tropical precip figure + text ?
> - Daniel, Ricardo, Ramesh, Peck : can you please send me what you think
> are the most relevant data to illustrate the abrupt changes in tropical
> precip (data + location of records latitude, longitude + references, if
> possible in Endnote format on a separated file if you already have it)
> - Peck : can you ask Julie to have a look at the last section (ENSO) and
> update the refs to coral works?
> - Sandy : can you have a look at the biome sections (introduction + warm
> early Holocene +�equilibrum runs sections) and improve them?
> The total (text + figures) should be about the right length after
> rewriting, I think.
> If you rewrite some of the text can you please send it in a separate
> word file (not correct this version?)
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